I tend to curse under my breath when I read good poetry (it’s a complement) and you had me curse at each line. I’m really excited to see what the rest of this series brings!
We got something in common bc I cuss when I think something's really good too followed by a yell and three snaps. Thank you M.P. for the cussing compliment.😂
this poem hit me in the gut—in the best way. The imagery was raw, visceral, and beautifully layered. I love how you made the body speak. Excited to see how the rest of this series unfolds. Keep creating boldly.
You are welcome. I love reading your shit. It's a great day to use the word shit.
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Thanks Gail😊🫶🏽
It's always a good day to use the word shit lol
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I’m a nurse so I appreciate the heavy body series and the fact that you have visual art 👌🏾 and the “let’s talk about it” at the end. I like your style
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I always make space to discuss interpretations for my visual + literary arts. Lots of layers in both so I give a lil bit of context.
'heavy body' is my first series but you'll see me write more. This series kinda happened unexpectedly but I'm glad it did.
Love the ending, “punctured pride” … I’m inspired to write. Thank you 🙏🏽
Thank you so much for reading. I look forward to seeing what you write. 🩶🙏🏽
nice! wanted to say visceral but that would be wrong...
Hold onto that. It'll be right later.
Thanks for reading Nick!🙏🏽♥️
thought as much!
neat concept ! like it!
I tend to curse under my breath when I read good poetry (it’s a complement) and you had me curse at each line. I’m really excited to see what the rest of this series brings!
Also: love the painting
We got something in common bc I cuss when I think something's really good too followed by a yell and three snaps. Thank you M.P. for the cussing compliment.😂
I appreciate you.
You’re very welcome. Ha ha! Yeah, if something is really good I scare the pets
this poem hit me in the gut—in the best way. The imagery was raw, visceral, and beautifully layered. I love how you made the body speak. Excited to see how the rest of this series unfolds. Keep creating boldly.