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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

These poems hit home, but especially this one. Goddamn. The burden of others in a backbreaking metaphor is KILLER! Stanza two is my favorite, but the more experimental last stanza made me curse the most-- just exceptional!

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Nick Winney's avatar

When i read this i feel like i can hear a voice and a beat. its subtly woven in there.

these are great great pieces of work.

words like tools sculpting a statue of your emotions, gleaming marble solid but also alive and warm and bloody.

If i had to pick my fave so far its still Nerves but they are all powerful.

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